lol! i’m sorry. i laugh because i had just written and action story sequel thingie and i jump onto this and it seemed completely and utterly random =]
ne-who, it’s sort of confusing, so you may want to do a bit of editing. try to use another word other than “and” if u hav trouble, u can google a thesaurus =]
otherwise, it’s pretty interesting. =]

Is this a hop hop rap song by 50cent???