oooo swimming – i miss it =( y does summr hafta b ovr?!! school, and no swimming. homework, and no playground or excessive sleepovers – no fair!
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newhoness.. bethrilling story [did i use tht word rite?] i highly enjoyed it =]

Seems ominous…very good ficlet as far as begging one to read the sequel and wonder.

Ominous & mysterious.
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I love that there seems to be something bad at the bottom of the Charles River. When I saw the picture, I was like, “So deceptive in its beauty, so toxic in its truth”, which is what the story ended up being about! Way to use a picture as a metaphor!

ok but where is it going until there is like a pinnacle in the story it will get a 5