How sad and moving. A great character study.

Wow, really neat twist. I’d been thinking Tessa was his girlfriend, but this twist is awesome, really adds so many different dimensions and possibilities. I’d gush more, but I don’t want to embarrass myself.

ohhh crap sorry meant josiah was tessa’s current bf. ahhhh!!

but if you want i can leave it like that…idk…

An interesting twist on the scenario, and a great example of how collaborations can take an idea in new and surprising directions. Imagining Tessa as an older character is a bold and interesting choice that works quite well. And Jenny is a credible addition to the cast.
I’m enjoying everything that’s being added. Thank you. And please, I’d love to see more!

My understanding had been that Tessa was Jenny’s mother, and Josiah was Tessa’s boyfriend, who Jenny didn’t like.

ahh.. mayb i shuld just read the sequels and then the comments cuz u guys r confoozing me :-/