yikes. great 1st entry into Yodas’ halloween Horror contest, youve set the bar high.
Eek! Nicely done.
Oh no, a doppleganger priest! Tough first entry to follow.
now whatever i write will look bad… thanks alot! in case you can’t tell from the jealousy, I loved it!
Shudder* Nice work, I definetly got the chills.
eeka eeka! doppelganger indeed! and lovely descriptive language, by the way.
Just for the record….”Brad” is not a vampire.
Great opening – a terrific first sequel. I’ve been out of town so this is the first one I’ve read…
Woohoo, congrats on getting onto the ‘Most Active’ List.
Wow…that’s creepy. Excellent.
Scary. Great job :)
Ooooh – looks like you got a leg up on the competition…. This really is very well done. The others are too, but this one is standing out. We’ll see what happens. Oh, the suspense of it all………… Better than reality T.V., eh?
I’m glad I didn’t read this before entering. If I did, I would be completely discouraged. It is just to good.
HOLY —that was meant to be a “good job”
I liked this a lot but I liked your sequel even more way to go!!!
I admit I prefer the sequel myself. But eh, I needed the background info.
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