I would put more paragraph markings to make it more clear. There’s a lot of repetition of words, but it doesn’t come out very rhymthmically. That said, I do like the idea. You can shove a bit more detail/wordiness in there and it could be awesome.
I would put more paragraph markings to make it more clear. There’s a lot of repetition of words, but it doesn’t come out very rhymthmically.
That said, I do like the idea. You can shove a bit more detail/wordiness in there and it could be awesome.
I like the take on the Book of Genesis.
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Alexa ♥