okay this is definitely more horror; liked the ‘landscape peeled away in a cascade of leaping flames’ line.

Satan just has a sense of humor.
Indeed.
~
But, I’m not familiar with either of your song choices (I know – I’m horribly uncultured), so it’d be nice to know the song names & bands.

This song was obscure but one I had stuck in my head…’Down On Me’ by Jackyl. Thanks for all the positive and even the negative comments.

THX you may write some fantastic ficlets

but are you really liscensed to make up words?

shin-ging – i’ve never heard of it

lol

i like this
i was reading the others and they are very good
:)
keep it up

Honestly, do you have to harsh on the typo? That’s what I get for cutting and pasting song lyrics without checking them carefully.

LOL

and thanks for fixing it :)