A Dream

by The Master of Them that Know

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As I stare into the horizon,
it feels as if I’m floating

Everything around me has disapeared,
its like I’m in oblivion

All I hear and smell is the ocean

The waves crashing against my legs,
then I wake up realizing it was all just a DREAM !

I wished it was all true,
but it wasn’t,
it was nothing.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Dream

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it.

  2. A Dream

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    A dream of a dissociative episode, or dreaming of near-dreaming. Hmm, layers and layers, sort of like an Escher drawing.

  3. A Dream

    The Master of Them that Know's Buddy Icon The Master of Them that Know

    Posted about 1 year ago

    thx for your opinons (i think that is how you spell it)

  4. A Dream

    Overlooked_Merchandise's Buddy Icon Overlooked_Merchandise

    Posted 11 months ago

    WOW missy, i never thought YOU would write poems (no offence, i just don’t see you as the poem tipe)

    pretty good though.

  5. A Dream

    Ramy's Buddy Icon Ramy

    Posted 5 months ago

    wow missy i agree completly with erin i love it though!!

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