A Reality

by THX 0477

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Horizon to horizon I see no ocean,
as if the land could swallow me up

There is no peace, no blank space,
as the details of life assault me

I hear and see so much it all means nothing

If only there could be waves
Some pattern or predictability

Could fate be merciful
No, there is no dream
This is life

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. A Reality

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I always wished i could write at least one really awesome poem..sigh, yours is great, but i never really understand poetry…

  2. A Reality

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked it – good use of simple language, stating a great deal in a minimalist sort of way… Cool, dude! – Yoda

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