Wow, it took me a while to figure out exactly what happened to Penelope. :) I really like this direction.

You did a good job on this on…as usual.

What the heck? You killed Penelope? Haha, that was unexpected! :-) Nice twist.

Oh silly, uselessness, the girl is not dead. She’s been knocked unconscious! Please, I wouldn’t kill a character this early. We have a lot of sequels to make, and we’re going to need all the plot threads we can create.