Colors of death

by suzieaim

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Red, green, blue. The spectral shades paint a picture of his death. One man, in a box, beneath a tree. His life was more vibrant than his death but similarly hued; red, green, blue.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Colors of death

    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice. And especially fitting since the tree in the picture does resemble the one from Six Feet Under.

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    Chuck Vose's Buddy Icon Chuck Vose

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very striking. It’s hard to imagine a life being more vibrant than the photo.

    Is it possible to reorder the phrase, “One man, in a box, beneath a tree” to more closely resemble RGB ? Something like, “One heart, beneath a tree, under the heavens”. Or something like that.

    As it is the spectral shades of RGB seem to be painting the death of someone else. But of course this is only my interpretation.

    Still a wonderful, striking ficlet.

  3. Colors of death

    Matthew's Buddy Icon Matthew

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Great, very haunting prose. I hope to see more of your writings.

  4. Colors of death

    ScribblerofTimesPast's Buddy Icon ScribblerofTimesPast

    Posted about 1 year ago

    The tree does look like the log to Six Feet Under. Powerfully written.

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    Reality Girl's Buddy Icon Reality Girl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely done. This is wonderfuly written.

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It’s really creative! i love it !

  7. Colors of death

    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is beautifully written.

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    Hush's Buddy Icon Hush

    Posted about 1 year ago

    poor. But makes you think. Work on it.

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    brunettechick's Buddy Icon brunettechick

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh my gosh, I love it so much. I’m into the whole thinking thing.

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