wow.. i love this..its really mysterious..great message too..
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Awesome sequel – love the perspective and it moves the story along. Thanks for writing this – great stuff! – Yoda LoA

Great title too. You really have talent.

Amazing sequel. I think it really fit with the first story…I really like this. Really, really. It’s…I don’t know the right word, even. Ugh…we’ll just go with awesome. If I think of that word, I’ll come back…
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5 stars

At the danger of “lurching close to cheesy”, as you put it before, I wrote a sequel to the story that sequels this one. I walked right up to the line of cheesiness and took at least one step back (I hope) – again, great effort here. Loved this! – Yoda LoA

All hail the Grand Awesome Marshall! (I should wear a funny little hat when I say that!) Anyhoo, Great job!!