The Third Kind of Rain

by Alexis DeHearts

I always said there was two different kinds of rains. Well, really three. Cleansing rain, crying rain and you’ve-got-to-be-kidding-I’ve-been-planning-this-picnic-for-months rain.
Today, as I pulled back my curtains, I knew it was the third kind. I hadn’t actually been planning a picnic, but something about the way the rain tapped on my window sounded despairing.
I pulled on my school sweatshirt, depicting the Jordan High Jaguar in white, against the navy blue. It was a standard among any member of my schools population. I selected a pair of jeans with little thought.
Glancing in my large mirror, I heaved a dissapointed sigh, as many teenage girls do when they see their body.
“KC, you’ll be late for school if you don’t hurry!” my mother called from downstairs. Dutifully honoring thier heritage, my parents had named me Katrazina. I prefered my nickname.
At least I was wearing my lucky jeans, however worn down they were. Not even Josh, who had desperatly liked me since sixth grade, could compliment these.

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this, it made me laugh, especially at the beginning with the three kinds of rain. Awesome!
    LoA

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, and welcome to Ficlets!
    LoA

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 9 months ago

    Thank you! Both for the kind comment, and for welcoming me.

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    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like this… your an awesome writer… I love her real name btw. Oh and ditto on the welcome…

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 9 months ago

    Thanks muchly! The sequal is here:
    http://ficlets.com/stories/18385

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    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 9 months ago

    Welcome, welcome. We always have room for one more. Great read.

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 9 months ago

    I’m going to becoem big-headed from all this praise… But thank you again!

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. This is really good. Pretty darn funny, too. I like your character. She’s quite charismatic.
    LoA

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    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 9 months ago

    Thank your very much

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