At the Station

by Denubis

As the world below them rotated, the ship’s engines kicked a few times. Echoes of God’s terrible roar rippled through the room: a reminder, a caution, or a mundane course correction; none could say.

The commuter rocket docked at space-station Rho. Not one of the glamorous new stations, but new enough. Gregor watched the rocket nestle into its appropriate slip like some obscene act shown on late-night TV. In the pseudo-null gravity of free fall, Gregor’s alcohol-burned sinuses seemed far more important than gathering his bag for unshipping.

Matti, with long-forgotten experience, maneuvered out of the harness. Gregor just sat and keened for hope long past. The pods ahead of them emptied slowly as Matti took their bags down from the compartments overhead.

A lithe form tumbled gracefully over the seat tops. The offerer of a bottle turned out to be a very slim young woman with what seemed to be a cast-iron stomach and a spacer’s jumpsuit. “I’m Hope,” she said, “Who might you folks be?”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. At the Station

    Three Gryphon[s]'s Buddy Icon Three Gryphon[s]

    Posted 8 months ago

    hmmm…. Interesting. I wonder where this is going… Besides Mars, of course.

  2. At the Station

    HaveToWrite's Buddy Icon HaveToWrite

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like bringing Hope back in as a fellow passenger. I guess Hope did leave on a rocket ;)

  3. At the Station

    Denubis' Buddy Icon Denubis

    Posted 8 months ago

    I’m not sure if we want the rocket brat to continue on, but the symbology seemed to fit. Old/wise beyond her years, named Hope…

  4. At the Station

    Geek Mythology's Buddy Icon Geek Mythology

    Posted 8 months ago

    I kind of agree with Denubis, this ficlet would be a good way to round them all off, going full circle with the idea of hope, but still leaving enough unanswered so as not to be spoilt.

    Having said that, I still want to know what happens!!!

  5. At the Station

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    Very cute. I’m all for Hope! Though with the deep voice, I can’t help but picture Dr. Girlfriend from ‘The Venture Brothers’, which is very silly indeed. I thought the pacing fit the weightless setting as well, for what it’s worth.
    LoA

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