Marguerite Discovers the Truth

by Nouvelle Bardot

Oh, no. What did I have to know? My mind raced as he hesitated, taking a moment to compose himself.

“You aren’t gay are you? Because that would be really awkward,” I blurted out, remembering the other man who I had noticed was here nearly every day. Could it be?

“No,” he said quietly, reaching out for me awkwardly, “I’m…I’m…”

“You’re married. I should have known,” I continued to blabber, sitting down at his piano bench, covering myself with the drenched bathrobe.

“Yes, I mean, not anymore…” he continued, “I can’t see you.”

“Oh, I get it,” I said, confused, standing up to go, “I’ll leave then.” I brushed past him. He caught me by the arm.

“Marguerite, I really can’t see you,” he said.

“Why?” I stammered, my cheeks burning hot.

“Because…because…Marguerite…I’m blind,” he said. Blind? I thought. What’s so wrong with being blind that he had to hide it from me?

“That’s it?” I said, relieved. He looked confused. I walked toward him and embraced him in my soggy bathrobe arms.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Marguerite Discovers the Truth

    madwriter108's Buddy Icon madwriter108

    Posted 7 months ago

    i might have “seen” that coming, but it’s still a good story…..by the way you should read my “silence” series-it starts on www.ficlets.com/stories/20718, and i would like you to read ALL the sequels!!!!!!

  2. Marguerite Discovers the Truth

    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 7 months ago

    well she had a very good reaction… guess our little Pierre was blowing things way out of proportion…

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    Still cute, though I think you maybe kept it going a bit longer than worked for me with the back and forth. Just seems like a reasonable person would have maybe been confused at the first statement but by the second would pick up on the wandering, aimless gaze of a blind person. Then again, our lady here isn’t exactly reasonable.

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Aww. I’m glad Marguerite reacted the way she did.

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