Charge!

by Lone Writer

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You let out a pircing yell. “Charge!” you exclaim leading your friends, waving the machete in the air.
“Wait!” you here Zoe and Joe cry, but its too late. Your adrenaline is rushing and your ready to fight!
Unfortunately you never get the chance, as you’re running forward you fall into a covered pit full of sharpened stakes.
Your last thought as you fall to a painful death is:
I hope Joe and Zoe escape from the pirates…
Maybe you should’ve stuck to plants.

THE END

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Charge!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    Please read “The Rules” before sequelling. http://ficlets.com/stories/21279

  2. Charge!

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    Whoops! You died! Please DON ’T sequel this!

  3. Charge!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Ah, another tragic end. Good use of the eluded to booby traps on the island.
    LoA

  4. Charge!

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 6 months ago

    Hurrah, I was waiting for a booby trap to unexpectedly pop up.

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