Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

by uselessness

I’ve never been one for sappy speeches or undue melodrama.

Every ficlet is like a snowflake, beautiful and unique in its own right, a tiny sparkling crystalline treasure. But together they form a vast winter wonderland, accumulating in bluffs and branches, forming families of snowmen and snow angels, a veritable playground for the creative sledder.

A good challenge is an invitation to throw snowballs with friends, a continuing series becomes a cherished fort. This place is for the curious homebody to catch a flake on her tongue before returning to the warmth of the fire, and we’re happy for her visit; yet those of us who wish to stay and play awhile longer will never grow bored with the company or games here.

Sure, there are times when Jack Frost swoops in and a blizzard of stories guarantees yours will be lost in the flurry. Or the unwelcome sun shines too hot for a moment and briefly, just briefly, we begin to melt. But it’s those times when we learn to adhere to one another, and our bonds grow stronger.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 7 months ago

    Very nicely put, I must say I agree with everything you’ve said.

  2. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was downright poetic, man. Excellently put.

  3. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    forming families of snowmen and snow angels, a veritable playground for the creative sledder.> great line.
    and great metaphor.
    LoA

  4. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very, very good. This is awesome. And as THX said poetic. Very well put.
    LoA

  5. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    childish acts' Buddy Icon childish acts

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    whoa. Dude this is awesome I like it! I love the snow stuff!

  6. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Where you’ve obviously typo’d homebody I know you meant somebody but I really like to think you actually meant homeboy.

    A very nice sentiment expressed in your usual eloquence.

  7. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 7 months ago

    I actually did mean “homebody,” meaning someone who usually stays at home instead of playing in the snow… but the thought of substituting in “homeboy” makes me laugh! :-P
    LoA

  8. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ahhh, I’ve never heard that word before. As you were.

  9. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    As THX said, downright poetic. This was beautifully written, quite metaphorical, and very, very true. I loved the last bit especially, it was a great finish to tie up the whole Ficlet. Beautiful.

  10. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    Kevin Lawver's Buddy Icon Kevin Lawver

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m going to have a really hard time pulling these all together into a 2 minute tear-filled speech.

  11. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    i live NYLSC's Buddy Icon i live NYLSC

    Posted 7 months ago

    the best part is these don’t melt in spring

    lol

  12. Walking in a Ficlet Wonderland

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Superb images, theme. This is a ficlet I’ve read and reread because it captures two of my favorite things: ficlets and snow.

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