Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

by THX 0477

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Forcing himself to sit back and plaster his hands to his thighs, Renard said calmly, “Now. Thiss is soo silly. Peopole will die? Why? Moost of us doon’t even know whut is going on.”

“You don’t need to,” Pablo snapped, mumbing half intelligible curses in Italian.

“Commun corteusy?” Renard tried.

“What?”

“Corteusy.” Renard repeated.

Izzy clarified with a sigh, “Courtesy.”

With a nod of thanks, Renard continued, “Besides, how ken we answer withoot questions?”

John cut in, “Where is Marco?” He asked it of the group, no one in particular.

“Who is Marco?” Renard countered, palms oozing sweat.

John looked at Pablo then went on anyway, “He used to work for our employer, a syndicate out of Naples. He stole something valuable, met a friend here, then disappeared. We want it back and will,” here he nodded at Pablo, “kill anyone in our way.”

Margueritte gasped. Izzy gritted her teeth. Renard looked relieved, “Was that enough, Olga?”

A deep, “Yes,” came from the bedroom.

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  1. Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 4 months ago

    Oh my god, who is this Olga person???? SEQUELLLL !

  2. Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Okay, okay, I’ll get to a sequel eventually. And believe me, I have it all worked out who Olga is, and her potential identity is even hinted at (or at least the possibility of her identity) in earlier installments. In the meantime, I’d love to see/read/hear how the other characters would react to all of this to this point.

  3. Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Olga? Oh my,ho could she be? Well, as I’m trying to process this, I’ll try to figure Pierre’s response as well…

  4. Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 4 months ago

    sequeled. i decided marguerite needed a turn…and i think i have a pretty good idea who olga is. i just had to think on it.

  5. Enough is Enough, Even of Courtesy

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WHO IS OLGA !!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? Such suspense!!!

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