Marguerite's Agony

by Nouvelle Bardot

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What was happening? Everything was a whirlwind. One minute Pierre and I are talking and the next, Izzy bursts in panicked, dragging me out the door and now there’s a crazy man with a gun shouting at us, and John is pointing a gun at Izzy and all I can do is sit on the floor and cry.

I can’t stop crying, I’ve never been in such a scary situation. Why is Izzy so calm? How does she know these people…who is the man in her apartment? I just can’t stop sobbing.

The man is screaming at me, he’s going to kill us. Izzy tells me to shut up, her voice sounds so gritty. I’ve never seen her like this before.

Pierre is stumbling around behind me, he seems so confused, he tries to reach out for me, but I push him away. I curl up and try to be quiet, muffling my terrified sobs

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Marguerite's Agony

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 6 months ago

    I’d probably do the same. Cry.
    I like that you went with Marguerite here, and was able to create a scene, repeating what was going on. it was clarifying, in a way.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Man, I actually feel bad about doing this to Marguerite. How crazy is that? I mean really. Obviously this is Izzy’s fault. Kidding. Great addition, bringing the whole thing back down to a personal, emotional level.
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  3. Marguerite's Agony

    Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz's Buddy Icon Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz

    Posted 6 months ago

    Wow… that’s such a softer side of Marguerite that I like seeing… these characters sure are complex…

  4. Marguerite's Agony

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Culture Shock sequeled, and then I sequeled his. Please reference my comment on his for my disclaimer. Were you right about Olga?

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 6 months ago

    Very good description of what Marguerite is going through. Poor girl!
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