Cendrillon

by Ana Cristina

“Well, I don’t have any definite plans…”

Sebastian took a deep drag from his cigarette. “Would you like to come visit la musée d’Orsay with me? We still have an hour before it closes, and I know of a great bistro around the corner where we could go afterwards.”

“Sure, so long as I’m back at my hotel at a decent time. I’m still getting used to the time change and I didn’t sleep too well on the plane.”

“I’ll have you tucked in before midnight, just like Cendrillon.”

“Cendri – Oh, you mean Cinderella!”

He chuckled. “The very same. My mother used to read me those awful stories when I was small. It ruined me for life – now I’m a hopeless romantic. Well, it looks like we’re here.”

He helped me off the boat and we walked the few blocks to the museum. He proved to be very knowledgeable about art, pointing out his favorite artists and the way they used shadow and light in their work.

“You must come here a lot.”

“You’re right. I work here.”

“You work here?”

“I am a curator.”

Comments

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    There is some great writing here – you have terrific talent. Nicely done!

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    There is some great writing here – you have terrific talent. Nicely done!

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OOps, I’m repeating myself. How did that happen?

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Yoda. Funny, I never thought I’d be writing that particular phrase. Excellent writing.

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Everyone agrees with Yoda. I decided long ago that any time in my life that I could agree with Yoda, it would be a good day and a good decision. Still a lovely little story about the city of lights, and nice Cinderella reference. That worked nicely.
    LoA

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 5 months ago

    Curator? Ooh, things are getting very very nice! . Yes, you do have a lot of talent. It’s very enjoyable to read your series!!

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think “lovely” is just the word. This series has a light, romantic feel to it that I really like. And I liked the reference to “Cendrillon” as well.
    LoA

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    Posted 3 months ago

    I will have to agree to everyone, well except for the part about never thinking I would ever agree with Yoda. Very nice lil reveal there at the end. I can’t wait to read the rest of the series.

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