Eyes On The Road

by THX 0477

Man, was that an awkward car ride. I mean, what was I supposed to say? “Sorry I ditched you in high school cause your grandma scared the heebies out of me. And I’m only in the car now on a 7 hour road trip cause you’re freaking gorgeous, and I have a thing for brunettes.” So I’m not the king of great things to say.

My eyes strayed from the overnight bag in my lap to the delicate waves and curls of her hair, following the chestnut waterfall down around her shoulders to…Eyes on the road! Eyes on the road! She already thinks you’re a chicken, so let’s keep pervert in question for the time being.

“You’ve grown,” she said in what sounded like an attempt at friendly. For the first time I wondered how she’d felt about being sent to fetch me.

“10 years will do that.” Dangit, why was I being sarcastic?

Thankfully she smiled when she said, “But still a smartmouth.”

“You’ve, uh, grown too.” Eyes on the road!

“Yes, time…” Her voice trailed off. I wished for all the world I could have read her face.

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  1. Eyes On The Road

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted about 1 month ago

    haha nice!
    can’t wait for the sequel!
    LoA

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    More please. =)

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Awesome, I love how nervous he is. It’s cute.

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great sequel, the story is becoming very interesting

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    Posted about 1 month ago

    Your humor is astounding, eyes on the road.. so cimical.
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