Murder in the Tower of Esimed

by Stovohobo

The sick shing of a blade being withdrawn shivered through the stagnant air. Its owner took slow, measured footsteps toward the prone body on the floor.

“I told you, I repeated myself one hundred times over – never try to interfere with my business when money is on the line.”

The body quivered on the cement.

Never try to dabble in what you don’t understand. Never look me in the eye with the look of one who believes he is in control.”

The man on the ground gave a soft, low moan. The pale squares of moonlight coming in from the outside illuminated his form.

The speaker sneered, face shrouded in the darkness, and brought the knife down. The gray cement was dyed a new color.

Never,” he reiterated one last time, and he sheathed his knife and walked out of the tower.

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  1. Murder in the Tower of Esimed

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooh, the villain! Great job on a despicable, entitled, sneering, bloody villain. Poor guy on the cement didn’t stand a chance.
    LoA

  2. Murder in the Tower of Esimed

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 5 months ago

    One nasty villian.. cold blooded. I liked the imagery of the first sentence, and >The gray cement was dyed a new color. descripitve w/o being graphic and tellin gus that he bled.
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