And the plot thickens… That’s a great last line. Where’s Lupita, though! Something tells me she just won’t let them bury him alive, even if he did ditch her in high school. Then again, us girls have been known to hold a grudge.
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Nice, I like where you’ve taken this series.

Agree with Ana, can’t wait for a sequel. Great job on this series. I’m not sure about her forgiving him, but you never know. And I would like to know soon…ha
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Also agreeing with Ana- awesome last line. It makes the event seem so ordinary, when it really isn’t.

And I must agree with you- daffodils just scream spring. Except it doesn’t look like spring here, it’s snowing.
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This just keeps getting better and better!
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Great series, very intrigued. Like the others, I loved the last line. It makes you thirst for more.

I especially enjoyed the opening paragraph – very hard hitting.

As per the other commentators, I am quite enjoying this series

haha. sucks to be him! =( But he’ll get out… right..??
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Poor guy! I’m sure he doesn’t deserve it!

You have a way of turning a serious situation into a comical one. not an easy task.
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Well, since he asked, they went ahead and told him. Personally, I would have wanted to know.

Oh, man. Probably my second least favourite option of how to go (the first being drowning in the ocean). ^shudder
This just gets better and better. :D
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