Spiraling out of Control

by Apple

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“What?” I asked in shock.

“I was getting breakfast this morning and when I walked into the cafe, she was there with Mendez. She looked like she was having a pretty good time too, they were laughing like crazy when I left.”

My head started spinning.

“And as much as I hate to be the bearer of bad news, they kept whispering back and forth to each other, and after everything he said to her, she’d start blushing and giggling.”

Did I say spinning? More like spiraling out of control. And now it’s collapsing in on me. oh crap I thought right before i hit the ground.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Spiraling out of Control

    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely done. I’ve continued the plot…
    LoA

  2. Spiraling out of Control

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it. I can totally see that melodramatic Jordan losing consciousness. lol

  3. Spiraling out of Control

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Although brief, I feel like Apple’s contribution to the series was nicely exexuted and apropos.

  4. Spiraling out of Control

    Aditi Broota's Buddy Icon Aditi Broota

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    not so sure about the collapsing part, but everything else makes perfect sense. good addition to a great series!

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