Salvation Wtih Luscious Curves

by THX 0477

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Wingtips, despite their deceptively swift nomenclature, are not built for speed. Fortunately, wearing your pants somewhere half-past your butt isn’t exactly suited to high speed pursuit. While I ran for my life, hands bound together in front of me, the cousins ran and tugged at loose-fitting pants.

In a clumsy version of a high hurdler I burst through some undergrowth and rolled down a hill, but I kept the momentum going back up to my feet and in stride. I watch a lot of action movies. My heart leapt when I saw her, in the soft glow of a streetlight leaning against a car, salvation with luscious curves. Lupita.

You idiot! I screamed at myself, on the inside, She’s not salvation. She’s driving the get-away car! But man, she did look good. With more than a little heartache I changed direction so I was still fleeing the cousins now crashing out of the undergrowth, and away from the brunette I was destined to kill.

All I can say is, thank goodness for high school track and clean living.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha, love the last line! ((I feel like I’ve said that in a previous comment.. )) Well obviously you end your ficlets very rememberly. =)
    LoA

    btw, I’m really liking this series.

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    Katherine Lenado's Buddy Icon Katherine Lenado

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i love this series. its awesome

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    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    great series. i agree with band baby, the last line is great.

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted about 1 month ago

    I agree with above: Great series and last line. It’s so cool!!!

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    leala1953's Buddy Icon leala1953

    Posted about 1 month ago

    this is good

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    Kermitgorf's Buddy Icon Kermitgorf

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Why are you not a published author?? that’s the big question.
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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Well, I’ve kind of been distracted with other things and have only recently finished anything worthwhile and of sufficient length. You’re all too kind, you especially Kermit.

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    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You sure have a knack for great finishing lines. :D
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    Melia's Buddy Icon Melia

    Posted about 1 month ago

    I was thinking the same thing as Kermit just as I clicked into this sequel. Your stuff is amazing.

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