Very, very quick pace. All exciting stuff, though you may have overshot on this one. Not by much, and just an opinion.

yeah, maybe, I just had a lot of ideas, perhaps I’ll backup and do a ficlet on Julian getting pulled over. That will give me at least two ficlets with dialog, one with Julian’s arrest, and one with his questioning. i need practice with dialog.

i love julian but i didnt think he was big enough to be called hulk i like how you tied all this together

i love julian but i didnt think he was big enough to be called hulk i like how you tied all this together

i love julian but i didnt think he was big enough to be called hulk i like how you tied all this together