Call Up

by Never Explain

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I dragged myself out the door after Young and Alex.

“How many other guys where there when you got jumped?” Alex asked in a low voice.

“When I finally got the guy off me, there was about six or seven other guys there.” I said, forcing myself to.

Young whipped out his cell phone. “I’m calling Chris.”

Chris is our “gang’s” unofficial leader. He real nice, but he is an absolute animal in rumbles.

I got out my cell phone. “I’m calling Aaron, I know the gang the jumped me, they might have a lot more than six or seven guys there. He’ll call some of his friends.”

Aaron was seventeen, he was well-liked and had a lot of friends from different crews and gangs. If we called him, there was help on the way.

We got the the street where I got jumped, met up with Aaron and his friends, and Chris was waiting for us.

Down the block, there was about twice as much guys there as I saw before, staring us down.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow.. all for a jumping? Must be a gangs life!
    LoA

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Lots of little distracting typo-type things, making it seem rushed. Quick movement to a huge rumble.
    LoA

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    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 6 months ago

    sorry, I was in a hurry to get it finished, i had other plans. I was running out of characters, so i had to improvise.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Finally got a sequel out. Let me know if I over-did it.

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    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 5 months ago

    It’s starting to escalate. Are we talking a Jets vs. Sharks fight, Greasers vs. Socs, or Bloods vs. Crips?

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    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 5 months ago

    it’s just your regular ol’ gang fight. nothing too organized. not as big as Bloods or Crips.

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    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Now this is getting interesting.

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