Victims of Circumstance

by uselessness

Thirty miles from here is a modest ranch house in the suburbs of Naples. Its walls glow pastel pinks and greens even after sundown; in stuccoed hues it nestles shyly behind hedges of hibiscus flowers and elephant ears. A picture-perfect home. Our picture-perfect home.

In the night air a tire swing breezes gently under an oak tree in the front yard. Illuminated by a streetlamp, our hand-made dolphin mailbox leaps from carved waves as though it were more than a flea market oddity.

Stars gleam upon the crickets and mosquitoes through a sky that’s never known clouds. A distant neighbor plays oldies in his garage as his shadow tinkers on the stately silhouette of a ‘69 Cadillac Calais. Not glamorous, but it’s Florida.

Beth and I know paradise. Our old lawn chairs, frayed from nightly use, sit on the porch and wonder where we are tonight.

We’re cuffed to a metal bench in the Fort Myers police department, thanks to that dead tourist and Beth’s bloodstained hands. A fluorescent light flickers condescendingly.

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  1. Victims of Circumstance

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Intriguing, Hmm,

    oh, yeah you’ve been sequeled,.

    :)

    S.J.

  2. Victims of Circumstance

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    cool, nice descriptions =)

  3. Victims of Circumstance

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting, and I agree, great descriptions.

  4. Victims of Circumstance

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Further agreement here.

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