The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 1:00 PM And 2:00 PM

by thebetweenspace

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Jack Bauer eat your heart out, Jason thought as he covered his imitation kevlar vest with a homemade CTU jacket. Shield around his neck, holster clinging to his waist, Jason was ready to live his dream. He was ready to be the hero.

But first, he needed some food. Where to go with so little time? In the distance, he spotted the alluring if not ubiquitous golden arches.

He stormed the establishment, shouting, “CTU! Everybody down!”

At first, they just stared. But then they saw his gun. And hit the floor. One peculiar man was walking to his table, tray in hand, oblivious to Jason. This must be the perp. Without hesitation, Jason tackled him, sending food and beverages everywhere.

“Where is the Serin gas?! Tell me or I will kneecap you! Don’t test me!”

“You don’t look like a CTU agent,” said the frazzled perp.

“Well, you don’t look like a criminal, but is that stopping me from arresting you?”

It was satisfying, right up to the moment when he was arrested for impersonating a fictional federal officer.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Grrr! I_ wanted to do a _24 story, but you beat me to the punch! Anyway, this’ll get me through till season seven starts next January (or at least till the Season 7 prequel movie this fall)...

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ah, when self-delusion and a rich inner fantasy life goes horribly, horribly wrong. Funny character.
    LoA

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 4 months ago

    The last line is brilliant…=]
    LoA

  4. The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 1:00 PM And 2:00 PM

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What an awesome idea for a series! And the titles are pure genius.
    LoA

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I can’t believe I’m featured! I’m such a dork I actually printed it out!

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    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 4 months ago

    Congratulations on the F.F.!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL I would’ve done the same thing, tbs, don’t worry. Kudos on being featured! :-)

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Gr8 work! Love it! Intense, interesting, unique and fun!

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    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 4 months ago

    Action packed. Congrats on a well deserved feature.!!
    LoA

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    TatianaMik's Buddy Icon TatianaMik

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t even watch 24 and you had me laughing so hard.

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    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted 2 months ago

    Jack Bauer eat your heart out

    ptcha!

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