Suspicion

by Never Explain

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After a few seconds, Anthony had realized that he had caused quite a ruckus. People were staring at him in an odd way. Anthony coolly acted as if nothing happened and absentmindedly picked up his Rubix Cube. That scrambled colors were all in uniform. While it was levitating, the Rubix Cube solved itself!

This gave Anthony an idea. One of his rare talents was that he could easily solve a Rubix Cube.

Maybe it was me… Anthony thought.

Anthony’s grip on the Rubix Cube tightened, and he walked up to his Boss, who has staring at him incredulously.

“You!” He exclaimed. “What the hell did you-”

“I’m going home,” Anthony said. “And my name is Anthony, sir.”

Anthony, completely forgetting all of his things at his desk, drove home to prove his suspicion.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I hate rubix cubes! I end up throwing them across the room! good sequel and made an insight to how strong he is on the insite because without thinking he stood up to he boss.
    Loa

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 5 months ago

    How can you hate rubix cubes? I love them! I’ve figured out how to not only finish it, but do little patterns on them!!!
    Wait… is that like totally nerdy? Oh well…
    LoA

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I personally love rubix cubes, but I’ve never been able to figure out the little buggers. I have no patience for it.
    Never Explain, you’ve got some ‘splaining to do in that last sentence. It’s not very clear: “Anthony, completely forgetting all of his things at his desk, drove home to drove his suspicion.”
    I think you might have meant to “assuage” (etc.) his suspicion? Maybe it’s just me, but I didn’t get that line. Other than that, I’m loving how Anthony is starting to defend himself now.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh yeah, and you’ve got sequel again. :p

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like that he’s starting to put two and two together. Although I agree with Ana Cristina that drove home to drove his suspicion doesn’t quite make sense. Other than that, brilliant. I love the bit about solving the rubix cube while it was airborne.

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    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 5 months ago

    With that last sentence, I was one letter off instead drove I meant prove.

    I’m fixing it….

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