Wow – thanks for the sequel & what a terrific job you’ve done here! This writing shows particularity and attention to detail that builds on what I was after in the original. I love the ending too – how you’ve left it open yet hinting at something tragic yet to come.

Well executed sequel. You’ve channeled the tone and vividness of the original and left room for more additions.

Helped create a memorable charatcer here.

I’m completely sucked into this Tara character. YodaOnCrack and THX really complimenting each other here.

You did a really good job on this. You left plenty of room for another sequal and left us wondering what will happen next.