Mellow Yellow

by Seth Miller

“Are there any other kinds of mallow besides marsh,” he asked between bites of his PBJ ?

Sabrina just chuckled. He’d gotten a glob of goober on his upper lip from the sandwich. Again.

“Here,” she said, wiping a smidgen of the stain away and handing him the remains of the napkin. “Clean yourself up and get your head out of the clouds.”

“Fluffy, billowy, pillows of marshmallow clouds,” he grinned. Heaven help her there was jelly slathered over his bicuspids.

“The most you’ve said to me in weeks and it’s your magnum opus on mallow?” She had turned away while asking the question, wiping coffee from Formica, not meaning menace. Not too much anyway.

Only now as she turned back he was sobbing. Big, shoulder-shaking shrugs of tears and wailing. Reverse laughter: giant guffaws of grief, ground from his guts.

He inhaled calmly like an Olympic swimmer and not like a drowning man.

“I just don’t know how to tell you I love you anymore,” he said through fishbowl eyes. “How to tell you I love you and that it’s over.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Will Hindmarch's Buddy Icon Will Hindmarch

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Terrific. You’ve got the language, the visuals, carrying us through and getting us involved enough for the gut punch to hit its mark. Nice. I just hope it doesn’t have to mean anything.

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    Seth Miller's Buddy Icon Seth Miller

    Posted 3 months ago

    Unfortunately, I think it means something. Though, likely not as actually analogous or straight-forward as you might think.

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    jeherv's Buddy Icon jeherv

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    good. very good. this is my favorite yet of yours.

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    Seth Miller's Buddy Icon Seth Miller

    Posted 3 months ago

    Thx, james.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Fantastic imagery in this one.

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