Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

by THX 0477

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow. Dark, haunting, and told with a sort of lyrical prose. It’s creepier how the narrator justifies everything he does.

  2. Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 3 months ago

    Stovohobo came close to the word I was going for…DEMENTED.

    Nice work, THX …but um…get yourself checked out, ok? ;)

  3. Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is very unlike your usual writing. In fact, I’m not used to seeing your work labeled MATURE . However, this does a fantastic job of revealing the dark and twisted mind of your narrator. I love that it’s in first person.
    LoA

  4. Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I loved the line Philistine spoilsports.

  5. Genius Unbounded: Out-of-Order Challenge

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 3 months ago

    Woof, that is a heavy one. I liked it :-D

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