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Split Personality?

Emily immediatly filled with a mixture of dread, fear, and hate of the Wonderball. As she continued to stare at the little ball in her hand, it rumbled and rang with growing intensity. Emily quickly thought of what to do before the Wonderball exploded in her hands, sending her into a coma and possibly killing Dana.

Just then the Wonderball clicked and both Emily and Dana’s eyes flashed to it.

I…never…meant…to..let..end…this..way.

“What?!” Emily breathed aloud. She started at the Wonderball in amazement. The ringing supsided, if only slightly, and the rumbling slowed a bit. It seemed to Emily the Wonderball, well.. half of it.. , was trying to stop the other half from exploding in her hands.

Emily looked up franticly and met Dana’s eyes. She saw Dana’s eyes scream “Do something!”

Yet Emily just stood there frozen, as if she were star-struck with her mouth slightly agap. She just stared at her friend, who’s eyes grew more and more alarmed as the seconds ticked by.

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Split Personality?
Hunting Beauty
Posted 3 months ago

Emily! Throw it out the window!
hahaha…I feel like I’m watching a horror movie where the girl knows she shouldn’t go in the room but she’s going to anyway and everyone’s yelling “Don’t go in! Run away!”
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Fantasy
Posted 3 months ago

man! this series is just messed up!

and i mean that in a good way. it’s so sinister…it’s one of the best ficlets series i’ve ever read!
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Phil Sporlan
Posted 3 months ago

great series
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Dr. Mousse
Posted 3 months ago

Gah! Don’t just stand there, throw it somewhere. Good idea Hunting Beauty, out the window is perfect!
LoA
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Sailor Emo
Posted 3 months ago

wow….....
RUN RUN RUN !!!
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PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)
Posted 3 months ago

I would change the “never met to” to “never meant to” otherwise it would seem as if the ball’s spell-checker is broken!
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Eckhouse
Posted 3 months ago

I love where this series has gone – much cooler than I ever imagined. And I love the possibilities for where to go now, too.
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thebetweenspace
Posted 3 months ago

Laughing at Hunting Beauty’s and PyroPunk’s comments. Great setup of Emily being completely paralyzed by fear.
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Six Feet Under The Stars
Posted 3 months ago

whoa. this is so awesome. seriously, this whole series needs to be published for real.
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THX 0477
Posted 2 months ago

I also liked and believed the stuck immobilized by fear. Neat tack to take, making the Wonderball conflicted, rather than wholly evil and conniving as I made it out to be. Maybe there’s redemption for the little plastic toy after all!
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Flute Loop<33
Posted 2 months ago

Do something!!! Actually, if I was in the same position, I would do the same thing..
LoA
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LovingYourHeartbreak♥
Posted 2 months ago

OMGGGGGGGGGGG
CRAPPPPPPPPPP
DO SOMETHING !!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!
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wytherwings
Posted 2 months ago

=O
uh-oh
throw it out the window!!! duck and cover!!!
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Jala
Posted 2 months ago

I really like what you did here. xD It gave me inspiration to continue this story on a different path. Split personality of evil? Sounds fun. :3
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suspensetaken
Posted 2 months ago

ommggggg…she needs to do something!! AHH !! these wonderball series are addicting to read..omg i hope she doesnt die tho