What can I say but WOW ! This one is perfect in every way. Over the top descriptions, perfect pace, and great action. Bravo sir, bravo. BTW , I’m on my iPhone so I can’t rate right now. 5 stars when I get back to a PC
Thanks a lot, guys. I had a lot of fun writing this one, and felt immediately that it was one of the best entries into this series since I started Bagman. The hardest part was the Cerberus3 line that you like so much, JM. Took me a while to get the right attitude in that line, heh.
You guys must have read a completely different story than I did, because I thought it was awesome. Really not sure why you’re all dogging it so much. Huh.
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I’ve always been an avid (dare I say: OBSESSED) reader, and started writing fiction somewhere around 5th or 6th grade. I read approximately 3 or 4 books a month, so new material is always a must!
I’ve written for a long time now, although the novel I started in high school has never gotten past the first draft stage. Over the last four years, I’ve fallen out of the habit of writing and I’m looking to ramp that up again.
I’m going to insert a shameless plug for my father. Jim Laughter and Victor J. Bretthauer recently published Escape to Destiny, and his book (and oncoming series) is available on tatepublishing.com!
Music You Should Try: The Dears, No Cities Left Sia, lots of albums…great voice.
Ficlet Series’ in Progress:
Bagman: a Cyberpunk series in the first-person narrative from different points of views. This series is rated Mature for drug-use, language, violence and strong sexual references. 30471 (in progress)
The Gerideon Chronicles: An experiment in writing in a classical style reminiscent of Sir Thomas Malory’s Le Morte D’Arthur.30988 (in progress)
Completed Ficlets
The Fog: My response to Ana Cristina’s Out of Order Challenge. 33175
Also check out my bro’s ficlets! Browncoatben! He’s not as good as me, but he wishes he was.
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