Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

by JMSquire

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Disturbing and chilling situation you’ve set up, and then an excellent twist on the challenge of ‘dead men tell tales’. Really inventive.

  2. Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with THX ’s comment. The closing paragraph really was an inventive way of working with ‘dead men tell tales’.

  3. Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    In your second to last paragraph, the phrase “there voices” should read “their voices.”
    This was an excellent read. I loved especially the denial of the last two, refusing to accept that they’ve died. Awesome entry.

  4. Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    Yeah deffinately the creepiest tale. How yoy describe each of their demise and the setting.. esp the ending.

  5. Deep in the mine [The Dead Tell Tales Challenge]

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cool. Morbidly fun, and a cool twist on the challenge.

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