Beautiful,Expressive Green Eyes (Pen's Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge)

by Apostrophe

An ambient light surrounds her from behind. It makes her look radiant. Maybe, I was just blinded by love. But she was the most beautiful woman I have ever seen.

Her long, shiny, chestnut hair framed her face. It reached far below her elbows . Her silky strands ended in corkscrew curls. Her hair was stunningly beautiful and appeared to be smooth and healthy. It reflected light that shone on it, like brilliant diamonds.

She looked at me, as if she could look deep into my soul. Her face, illuminated by her expressive green eyes,held a relaxed expression. Her lips, like her cheeks, a rosy pink and slightly flush. Her complexion smooth and clear.

When she looked at me, she appeared to be lost.. She didn’t speak, but I could feel her communicate with me, with those expressive eyes,that mingled and danced with mine. They expressed concern and longing. She looked to her right and her left. Within a blink of an eye, she vanished.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Beautiful,Expressive Green Eyes (Pen's Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge)

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted 2 months ago

    A fleeting moment with a thing of beauty!! I love it…

  2. Beautiful,Expressive Green Eyes (Pen's Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge)

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 2 months ago

    The last paragraph is particularly my favorite- it gave me goosebumps. You really captured the mood of wonder and infatuation in this one. Great job!
    -LoA

  3. Beautiful,Expressive Green Eyes (Pen's Hauntingly Beautiful Challenge)

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love the ending. The descriptions were wonderful and the end just comes as perfect and shocking. Nicely done, thank you for entering. :]

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