“Aha!â€? he proclaimed with all the drama of a Vaudeville act

The drama geek truly appreciates this line!

And this man is getting creepier and creepier by the second.

Written with your usual flair and I love the pacing of the dialog.

oh, a sequel, and using sight! You know I’m a sucker for details using the five senses so I can really get into a story! :)

I love shiny things. Must take after a magpie, or something. : ) But, great descriptions, and equally great sequel.

and sound, I just thought that sight came through better, stronger.