Trying to Hold On

by Bartimaeus

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It was all just a lie… I thought to myself, my hands now clenched into fists.

“Tyler? Tyler, please tell me you’re ok…” She wasn’t holding back her tears anymore, and I could tell she was beginning to sob.

“I’m fine, Candi…” I didn’t do so well in hiding my emotions when I spoke.

“Tyler… Remember what you said? Remember what you promised me? Please tell me… you won’t do anything… You have no idea how much that hurt me, and the rest of your friends when we saw the scars on your arm…”
She was all-out tears now, trying hard to form words between her heaving breath from sobbing.

I felt so torn and angry… Everything was perfect… Why did it all have to come crashing down?!
“Why, Candi?” I whimpered.
“I’m so sorry Tyler, but you had to know… You’re my best friend, and I couldn’t just keep that from you…”
I shook my head and pounded my fist on the wall.
“I gotta go, Tyler… Please promise me you’ll be ok…”
“ok..”
I hung up grimly.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Trying to Hold On

    moonlight_girl 's Buddy Icon moonlight_girl

    Posted 2 months ago

    you dont need anything remember that you need to be strong and keep going you need to hold tight and never let go you need to keep moveing forward but all you really need is love someone to care and you have that so keep smileing no matter what happen in the past

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    what a cliffhanger for band baby to pick up!

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    His anger seeps into me and I find myslef giving an angry face. Great emotion here!
    LoA

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    AwkwardlyReversed's Buddy Icon AwkwardlyReversed

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree with blu

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thank God for ficlets, the amazing alternative to the other thing. =]

  6. Trying to Hold On

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 2 months ago

    incredible emotion here.
    i second what flute loop said.
    =]

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 28 days ago

    wow. I must agree incredible emotion in this piece

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