These memories kill. [extended haiku]

by Ana Cristina

Every night, I crawl
into my cocoon of pain
and disintegrate.

All I want is one
night without stars, only moon,
and no suffering.

I want for you to
swallow my tears whole, till you
taste their bitterness.

Give me the sleep that
is dream-less, that is past-less.
These memories sting.

My days grow stagnant
and pale, like the walking dead.
These memories kill.

Comments

  1. These memories kill. [extended haiku]

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Very painful, very bleak, and yet the haiku flow is great and adds some beauty. :)

  2. These memories kill. [extended haiku]

    ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫'s Buddy Icon ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Wow – that’s a sad one!
    But awesome.

  3. These memories kill. [extended haiku]

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted about 1 month ago

    I can see your feeling some pain in this one. But I love it and I can relate…somewhat. lol, great job!
    LoA

  4. These memories kill. [extended haiku]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Great last line, and inventive use of the haiku format.

  5. These memories kill. [extended haiku]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    You have sequel, sweet-cheeks.

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