The End is Not Enough

by SJHundak/S.J.Willing

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She didn’t register the shattering of glass, or the dull rumble of the explosion as one side of her house disintegrated into a pile of wood chips and rubble.

At least she didn’t notice until she was safely, relatively speaking, curled up under the kitchen counter, the small cupboard door almost pulled shut behind her.

She shook as sporadic bursts of gunfire split the creak and groans of the disabled building. Some of the bullets even tearing shreds from the cabinets close to her.

“그녀는 여기 있지 않는다” a gruff voice growled, Bethany trembled at the hatred she felt.

“화상은 모두, 자취를 떠나지 않는다” a second voice, one of cool command answered.

Terrified, Bethany listened as the strangers clomped about and left the house. She sat, terrified of moving, then heard a whispering sound that was almost as terrifying as the men’s first approach.

The stink of scorched wood and smoke confirmed her suspicions.

They’d set her house on fire.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The End is Not Enough

    Laine the Grey's Buddy Icon Laine the Grey

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hmm, interesting.

  2. The End is Not Enough

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you, must admit a slight departure from my crazy, weird type of humor style LOL

    S.J.

  3. The End is Not Enough

    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooo. Nice!

  4. The End is Not Enough

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    hehe hope you sequel…

    :)

    S.J.

  5. The End is Not Enough

    //miss mia//'s Buddy Icon //miss mia//

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    really good—- but i dont’ understand it completely. wat was the voices saying to her?

  6. The End is Not Enough

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Bablefish poorly translated korean goes something like this.

    “She isn’t here?”

    “Burn the place down”

    :)

    S.J.

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