my rawr

by //miss mia//

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“Junior, you have only been alive for 13 days. Chill out a little bit. Slow it down. It’s great that you like to impress the humans, but you can’t go on wearing yourself out every day for them!!”
“I know mom, but you should just see the looks on their faces!”
“I know that it thrills you, and thats great honey, but I mean take a break.”
“Do you think we could have the people who feed us take down these glass walls? I mean it would just be great if there wasn’t one cuz I could let the humans touch me. And when I do my rawr it would just be great if there wasn’t a wall to muffle the sound!!!!! Just imagine what they would do if they saw how totally awesome my rawr was!! They might put me in a movie, a movie starring me!!! That would be so cool! and then i would have millions of money!! Don’t you think that would be cool mom?”
“Yes honey, just great. Your going to have to work on that rawr though.”
“Well duh mom!!! Everybody knows you have to practice!!”

“Hey dad! Listen to my Rawr!!!”

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. my rawr

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    You make the baby tiger sound so cute!! I think you need to work on saying a bit more? And I don’t know how mobile a tiger is, having only been born thirteen days before. :/ You might want to check that out, for accuracy’s sake.

  2. my rawr

    ekul kalig's Buddy Icon ekul kalig

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    you say you want help to be a better writer, well here it is. wen u rite a story, try to make the readers ready for more of ur stories, leave them hanging at the end of ur story. But most of all, make sure that ur story will only be able to hav a sequel or prequel written by only YOU !

  3. my rawr

    ekul kalig's Buddy Icon ekul kalig

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    and don’t worry about having accurracy about facts about ur characters, spelling, or pronounciation, cuz not being accurate in those categories is called taking “Writer’s Authority”

  4. my rawr

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 11 months ago

    Reminds me of Simba in The Lion King. Creative!

  5. my rawr

    TotallyNOTBlonde's Buddy Icon TotallyNOTBlonde

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cute . . . I love the word rawr!

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