She's Got It, I Don't

by TotallyNOTBlonde

We were all in ‘the yard’. It was hott so we were just sitting under the shade of a big tree. Ty was sitting right next to me. He put his hand on the ground and I put mine over his. The only one of not present was Teddy.
“Dudes, where’s Teddy?” I finally asked. No one responded so I knew it had to deal with a girl. “Who is she?” I asked and sighed.
“Her name is Brixley Scramsin.” Mitch finally said.
“Eww.” I replied. Brixley was short, had brown eyes and hair, and always, always had the latest fashions. We started a game of thunder & lightning when I heard that familair giggle. I turned around and there they were laughing it up. Teddy was so nervous, you could tell from the body launguage. “Ohh gosh” I made gagging noises. Teddy was like a giant flirt with her. He never flirted with me. What am I saying why would I want him to flirt with me? But still what’s she got that I don’t got?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. She's Got It, I Don't

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    didn’t see this coming…good

  2. She's Got It, I Don't

    Officially's Buddy Icon Officially

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, that one surprised me…but I still like Ty…meh, she’s gonna ruin it. things always get ruined. Still, good job, you have me very interested.

  3. She's Got It, I Don't

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ehmagaud!!!!
    she likes both of them =]

  4. She's Got It, I Don't

    Bigkittyproductions' Buddy Icon Bigkittyproductions

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What I wanted to hear more about ty and the tning that happened

  5. She's Got It, I Don't

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    Her motivations are kind of shifty.

  6. She's Got It, I Don't

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah…you skipped around a lot; i thought she liked ty?

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