Destroyed

by TotallyNOTBlonde

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I was lying on my bed in my room reading. How could he I thought. “Letting them tape us” I said out loud. “What a jerk” I cried. Then the doorbell rang. I ran down to answer it. There was Ty staring back at me. He had flowers. “Oh god” I muttered. “What are you doing here?” I asked him.
“Umm I came to apoligize. Ohh and I brought you flowers” He smiled and held up the daisy’s. He handed them to me I tooked them and smelled them. “Look Linz, I didn’t know Teddy and Mitch were there. To tell you the truth I don’t even know how they got in.”
“Oh” I said. “Really?”
“Yeah. I mean why would I ruin such a perfect moment with video tape” He joked.
“Yeah” I said and giggled.
“Just so you know I got the tape back and everything too” He said.
“Okay, great thanks” I said. He started to leave.
“By the way you’re a great snuggler” He said and laughed.
“Arrg!” I frowned and closed the door. Sometimes he makes me just as mad as Teddy.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

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    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    nice

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ARG ?!?!?!!?!?
    GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR .
    ima slap her =]

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    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very interesting :)

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    User 5164's Buddy Icon User 5164

    Posted 11 months ago

    yeah just one of those special moments :)

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    User 5181's Buddy Icon User 5181

    Posted 11 months ago

    Daisies???
    Excuse me. Have you ever actually smelled daisies?
    This story can’t be true, or when she smelled those daisies she would have clobbered him over the head with them.
    For your information, daisies smell like sweaty socks. Try roses next time.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 11 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    {laughing at 5181}

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    User 5206's Buddy Icon User 5206

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    it def has possibilities, but your main character is all over the place. try to figure out who she is really

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    User 5277's Buddy Icon User 5277

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wanna be my sex toy??

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    laughing at 5181, disgusted by 5277.

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    same as mouthwash girl.

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    :) lol

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    The Master of Them that Know's Buddy Icon The Master of Them that Know

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very funny 5181, grossed out by 5277
    but good story

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