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First Kiss

by Tiggerstripn2

Grace looked through everything in her closet.
Nothing, I have nothing to wear, plopping down on her bed.
Karen, I’ll call Karen.
Come on over I have the perfect out fit.
The perfect out fit, makeup, and hair.

Jeff knocked on the door, she opened it, he was perfect.
We can get a cab if you want, he said.
Were just going six blocks, less walk.

They walked to the little cafe talking and laughing the whole way.
They eat and started the walk back.
I’m not ready to go up, you want to sit in the garden he ask?

They sat on the bench looking at the stars sparkling like glitter in the night sky.
The moon was smiling down on just them.

Jeff looked at her, your beautiful you know.
She blushed, and dropped her head, then tilted it to look at his face.

His eye’s sparkled like the star’s in the sky.
He leaned in and pulled her face to his and kissed her.

A shiver ran through her entire body, fireworks were going off in her head.
She had never seen his romantic side, but she liked it.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. First Kiss

    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    interesting but kinda hard to read because there are no quotations and you don’t click enter to start a new quote. Otherwise good.

  2. First Kiss

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    that was okay I kinda liked it but dont forget grammer eventhough I am kinda bad at it ! lol

  3. First Kiss

    love'snot4me's Buddy Icon love'snot4me

    Posted about 1 year ago

    so romantic and awesome keep writting

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