God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

by Sophia D'Soleil

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My lungs were on fire and my legs ached like they never had before, but i couldn’t stop. I kept sprinting, corridor after corridor. Those things behind me, i had to get away from them. I couldn’t even believe they’d found me, after so many years, how was it possible? Tears sprang to my eyes as i remembered the sight of my sister’s head flying off her shoulders after being cut off by one of them. One of them, what were they? Damned souls who drank blood and killed without mercy. I couldn’t become one of them, i had to get away. I sprang from the dungeons leaping up the stairs two at a time as fast as i could. I flung open the doorway and sped off into the night. I looked behind me and saw nothing. They weren’t following me. I turned around, i was almost touching the gate! I was almost there, just a little further!
“AGH!” I cried out as a cold arm snatched me around the waist, pulled me close to their hard body.
“NO NO NO , GOD SAVE ME !” i cried, but it was of no use.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    thats intense!

  2. God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    okay, hold on…fill me in here…is this a sequel to Batak’s entry, or another entry that should be connected to YodaOnCrack’s challenge?

  3. God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Yeah, I was a little confused about that myself.

  4. God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

    Sophia D'Soleil's Buddy Icon Sophia D'Soleil

    Posted about 1 year ago

    ok, sorry, just to clear that up, this is just for yoda’s challenge, not a stem off of batak’s entry. Sorry, but i figured there was more of a chance of people reading this if there weren’t fifty other sequels next to mine =\

  5. God Save Me[yoda's challenge]

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sophia, you don’t have to explain anything. I liked your sequel, and I truly think it’s worthy of a 5 star rating. If you’d like to write another sequel (from my original challenge), feel free and I’ll comment on it as well. There is some great gore in this story, by the way – the kind of stuff (and I truly mean this) that I was originally looking for…

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