Ooh, yet another layer. Very fun. Just what is she?!

I really do like the whole opposite of the damsel-in-distress, surely what you were going for. Always good to know that you’re getting the ideas you want understood understood.

I love the “Boy in Distress” version, and that he’s willing to die to keep her safe. Proves that Laurel isn’t wasting her time saving him.

Wow i love this your work is very deep even if it is fiction or is it ? We have yet to find out what the monster is truly.