very nice!

As the rain embraced me, I escaped into the city

nice ending line

cooooool

Hahaha. I didn’t know I’d commented on this before. Look at that, what a sophisticated thing for me to say. “coool.” Hah.
Anyhow, I really like this. It’s beautiful, sad, but not overpowering. Wonderful! I love the first paragraph—”Tears crawl down my cheeks.” And the last bit too, like Flirting said. I love it.

she calls her mum by name, must be an open relationship. i like the dreary mood you set with this.

Ficlety goodness.

this is a really good story and you should continue!