I had fun doing the sequel, which was definitely a challenge for me to stay in the theme and style, which I can only hope I approximated. And I’m not even sure where the destroyer line came from…it was late at night.

This is very dark, and great descriptions to match the overall mood. Definite writing style comes out…I like it.

the imagery of the blood was palpable. great descriptions.
Ty that you enjoyed my H.S Hamlet ficlet, reading and performing Shakespeare, really makes a would be writer better at their craft. You are definatley a creative writer.

very nice…very ominous mood of things to come, i like it!…and the imagery of the blood. and the symbolism of the thread. it IS symbolism right? :/

yes it is symbolism

im afraid i cant give you much insight into what it’s symbolising exactly – but it’s kind of about her existence and how tainted it is by the place she’s in and how it’s strangling her soul – the thread is the place and her flesh represents her existence

kind of… :/ lol