Certainly raises the tension a bit.
I was writing a prequel to Alexa’s chapter and just as I was getting ready to publish it, I notice your addition. I’m going to go back and revise, now :-)Very cool twist, by the way.
You are an evil, evil man. You know that, right?
Lol, this is a great totally separate story now. Very fun. Very devilish character.
Then he wraps her in a carpet, and the whole thing comes full circle . . . just kidding.
bob is definatley one the best ficlet characters ive read. great job
Very nice twist, told you he had all the answers.
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