Yikes, I know I’m concerned.

Also had to comment the pacing and tone are very fitting. Well done.

Hmm. Seems like the start of a good story…

thanx, I prequeled it, hope you like the story of her abduction before her being thrown into the filthy bathroom.

interesting…

this is really good!

that was great

oooh i like this

i like the write the sequel then the prequel idea
makes things MUCH easier lol

all i want to know is – how could she still be alive without food after 3 weeks?! surely she would be beyond weak if the last meal she had was three weeks ago
and i’ll assume she’s drinking the water out of the sink to keep alive

just a few points to note
not to be nit picky or anything!!! lol

I kinds forgot she’d need something to eat. hmmm.

i took your suggestion and made her beyond weak. ty artistsrunwild!

YEAH ! it sounds much better now and is practically scientifically correct

:)

i love the rusty water bit…perfect

now you get 5 stars :)

ps – i like the new threads in your dp

lol

No one noticed all the bad spelling.. (which I corected) I guess Laine P. Grey didnt read it. lol

hmmm something worse than murder? nicee =]

very nice…and weird pic :$ but in a good way.

I like what you did with the picture, very nice. You’re getting better….